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Post by Streamshine ~ Talonclaw on Aug 13, 2010 20:56:59 GMT -6
Well heres her story:
Part One:
I was born into a pack called the Convill River Pack. My pack was strong and lived for a long, long time. I was the daughter of Tide and Snow the Leaders. I was treated with respect. I was named Akka and my brother was Kai. My mother was pure white and so was I. Tide was a great wolf and he was a shining pitch black. By the time I had grown into a yearling, a famine came to our land. We barely had any food. Luckly me and Kai where fed enough, but it was only two bites, for the rest had to eat also. To make the famine even more bad, a hunter came and stared to hunt our moose. One day, I thought I knew a solution. I padded over to Tide and said to him "Should we move to a new territory?". Tide shook his grizzled black head. I was downcast. The famine lasted for a year and we had lost one of our wolves. Luna the Delta didn't gain enough food. Luna was swift and small. She was also my best friend. I was so sad when she had died. The spring brought flowers and new elk. The famine had past! In celebration we frolicked in our green feilds. When I had grown old enough to be the beta, with one of my packmates, Ezio, I found out of a wolf who was soon going to be banished from the Nukas. His name was Venom. Even his name actrated me. Me and him snuck out at night one night. He was a dark black wolf. When I had first done it, I waited outside of the border for him. And sure enough he came. Those dark amber eyes flashed with a sort of fire. There was just . . . just something about him. Oh I can't explain it. His body was slender and hard mucseled. From the second he saw me I knew he loved my beautiful snow white fur. And his eyes. We had to be together. One night I asked him "Do you think we should head out together?" When his eyes flared in happiness, I knew we should head out. I had thought about saying goodbye to my pack but I knew they would make me stay. So me and Venom had set off as mates. We were just wandering parters. And I was fine with that. As long as I was with him nothing mattered.
I'll do more later.
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Post by Darkfur/Snowwing on Aug 14, 2010 13:11:19 GMT -6
Its Good ^^ I can't wait till you do the rest.
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Post by Streamshine ~ Talonclaw on Aug 14, 2010 13:41:57 GMT -6
Yeah I have to plan the rest.^^
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Post by Streamshine ~ Talonclaw on Aug 16, 2010 16:46:50 GMT -6
Part Two:
Venom and I travled far and wide, just to loners. One night, while me and him where sleeping under a great oak I had the strangest dream: Snow was right in front of me. "Mom!" I yelped happily, but she had a sad look on her face. "What is it?" I asked her. Snow looked at me and said "You and Venom. You don't belong toget-" but I cut her off "But mother! I love him!". She continued "My mother, Moonsong fell in love with a Nuka just as you did. Your great-grandfather was Blood." Even the name scared me. I shivered. Then I looked at my mother. "Your wrong." I growled. "Venom and me do belong together!" I yowled with all my might. Something was poking me. I looked up and saw Venom's dark amber eyes full of happiness. He can't possibly be evil! I thought as I got to my paws. "Good morning, Venom." I said and brushed my pelt against his. "We should get going." he said in his deep scary voice. I could make out the love in his voice. I nodded and we padded on, not caring where we went. We stopped to howl on a boulder. "I lean on you, and you lean on me! And I know we'll be alright!" I howled the little song my mother crooned to me when I was a puppy. Venom howled his deep, shrill howl, but to me it was a joy to hear him howl. You won't belive what happened next. My life was shattered when this happened.
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Post by Darkfur/Snowwing on Aug 17, 2010 10:08:02 GMT -6
o.O I wonder whats up with Venom. Can't wait for the next part!
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Post by Streamshine ~ Talonclaw on Aug 17, 2010 16:06:53 GMT -6
Part Three:
Ok heres what happened to me and him. You problaby think he bit me or went after another female, but its not that. When me and him slept by the rock, a burning smell reached my nose. A fire! I roused Venom and he sat there wide-eyed. "Venom. Where should we go?" I coughed. He looked at me then barked "This way!" He ran through a gap in the fire, and soon I was trapped. The fire licked at my pelt. I jumped on top of the rock a yowled "Venom! Help!!" But I couldn't hear or see him. The smoke was getting highter towards me and I couldn't see any escape. Thinking quiekly I lept off of the den with all my might, flying off of the den. My tail tip was scorched, but I had made it out of the fire. Coughing, I sniffed the ground for any trace of Venom's scent. But it was masked but the smoke. My heart ached. Venom . . . I should have followed you out. This is all my fault! I thought ashamed of myself and at the same time, very sad. Venom was my life.
Venom ran. "We're allmost there Akka!" he panted. No reply. "Akka? You ok?" he asked still running. No answer. Venom stopped and turned around. Akka wasn't even there! "Akka?" he asked as if she was hidding under the tall grass. Still nothing. "Oh Akka . . . . " he wined. "I should have waited for you." he growled to himself and looked at the tower of billowing smoke. Live, please live! he thought. Venom's heart was emty now and full of shame, greif, and sadness. "AKKA I NEED YOU!!!!" he wailed into the night, but there was no answer. Give it up. Shes problaby dead.He thpught. I promised I'd protect her and I broke it!
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Post by Darkfur/Snowwing on Aug 18, 2010 13:41:33 GMT -6
O.O i though something else would happen, like he'd try to kill her
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Post by Streamshine ~ Talonclaw on Aug 25, 2010 17:54:14 GMT -6
Part Four:
I kept searching for Venom for 6 moons and all I found of him was a tuft of his fur. It had been blown away in the wind and I problaby came across it. My heart ached so badly, I wan't to howl my heart out. The only food I had found was a mouse and I was dull, crummy and tired. But I told myself never to give up. The pain in my body was nothing to the way I felt mentally. I was still busy crossing the long plain that seemed to stretch out forever. Soon I was too worn out to walk another step and I collapsed into the grass, sleeping. My dreams where confusing and dark. I kept waking up, feeling restless. But you know what made me move on? I had puppies in my belly. I kept hoping one of them would be like Venom. I trudged on for 2 more moons, still sad and heart-broken. My stomache was always half full of food. Soon when I was tired of crossing this plain and that Venom was nowhere in sight. Finally I couldn't take it anymore; this was useless. I threw back my head and let out a shrill, sad, frustrated and plain heart broken wail. Another howl reached my ears. Sadly it wasn't Venom's deep shrill howl. Instead it was a understanding regular howl, but I ignored it and carried on. I didn't feel like myself. Usually I was happy, sweet and strong. But now, I was the oppistie of those. Venom searched the woods all around for a long time. There was no trace. He was frurious with himself. Stupid fur-ball! Shes now where near here! Go to the plains. Venom galloped towards where they got sperated. When he reached it he expected to see her standing there waiting for him, but the long grass just swayed in the gentle breeze. He scented her on the grass but it was so faint he could barley make out her scent. Venom's heart flickered with hope. Akka was alive! Venom carefully followed her scent not wanting to lose her again. After a moon Akka's scent was different. He could smell that she was pregnant. He growled. Akka was his! Nuka blood should never be passed on to the pups! he growled in his head. Who knows who will turn out like Hawk. Hawk was Venoms' dad and also leader of the Nuka River pack. Venom wasn't sure if he was going to keep going after Akka or stay away from her. Venom was never good with pups, bad things happened when he was around them. Then the most heart-breaking howl peired the air. It was Akka's! She sounded . . . . so sad. Venom was overjoyed and howled the most happiest howl ever. It didn't even sound like him! He frolicked towards the howl, but it was snatched by a strong gust of wind. He snarled in frustration. Now he would never find her! The could where gathered and drips landed on him. It was hopeless.
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Post by Darkfur/Snowwing on Aug 26, 2010 5:45:09 GMT -6
Aww, so sad.... Keep it up Steampaw!
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Post by Streamshine ~ Talonclaw on Sept 22, 2010 16:11:38 GMT -6
I lied down under a rock a few days later after hearing the howl. The weather was cloudy and gloomy, making me feel sadness and loss fill my chest. I half groaned half yelped at a kick in her stomache. I collapsed on the ground panting hard as I was about to give birth. Only if Venom where here!I thought sadly. Pain crashed into me as a silver and gray pup came out. Just as I was about to get down and bite the sack, more pain came and another pup appeared. This time I was able to break both sacks without another birth. The two whimpered as the crawled towards me, grunting as they began to suckle. The sound reminded me of being a pup. Another spasm passed and a black brown puppy slid out. He pushed the brown one aside so he could get his share. I licked my pups and began to think of names for them. Exsioustion swept over me and I fell into a deep sleep; picturing Venom and me running happily trough clover feilds.
Venom's happiness disaapeared by the next few days. Everyday was tourchure and he couldn't sleep without dreaming of the fire. Was he going to be a lonely, evil spirit forever? It seemed so and Venom didn't think Akka would find him. He had met a flirty female who nuzzled him when she lied her blue gaze on him. He had snapped at her throat, drawing blood; at first he was a bit startled, but then he liked it. It was something to do that wouldn't remind him of Akka. Akka . . . everytime the name echoed in his head, his heart felt like it would burst with sadness and grief. He just wanted to die, but killing helpless wolves didn't sound so bad. Then he would find his Akka. Akka. it swirled in his head.
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Post by birchpelt on Sept 22, 2010 17:10:38 GMT -6
=D! Pups!
Omg i.i -Slaps Venom- Do not kill helpless wolves Dc<
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Post by Streamshine ~ Talonclaw on Sept 22, 2010 17:13:48 GMT -6
Exactly why he haunts Streampaw! Only Akka can calm him!
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Post by Streamshine ~ Talonclaw on Sept 24, 2010 17:02:27 GMT -6
Sorry for duoble posting. I opened my eyes when one of my pup's whimpered. It was gray, silver, and blue one. I reached out and nosed her towards her brothers and she grunted happily.
"Now what should I call you?" I whispered to her. Her fur color reminded me of a gentle stream. Stream? Yes, thats a good one.
"Stream." I barked softly and nuzzled her. Then I looked towards the dark black-ish brown pup. Something like Venom. Hmmm . . . . Talon? Yes Talon. I decided and told him his name. When I looked at the brown pup, I knew he was Kang.
Venom snarled at the strong male. He showed his fangs back. Venom rushed forwards. The white male snapped at his neck, but closed on thin air. Venom had dodged and slashed open his stomache. He snarled in his white face and he went howling away. Venom huffed out his blood covered chest. No one can stop me from getting back Akka!
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MoonstreamWarriorstormKitewind
Deputy/Medicine Wolf
1 GOLDEN STAR TO YOU, MOONY <3
The mommies eat the pups. It's all an accident. The bees are just an add-in-bonus, ROFL
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Post by MoonstreamWarriorstormKitewind on Nov 23, 2010 15:49:53 GMT -6
So suspenseful. Cant wait for more!!!
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Post by Shadowleaf -Cometfire -Duskpup on Nov 25, 2010 10:04:41 GMT -6
Please hurry with the next chapter!!!! (Not being pushy, noo)
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Post by Streamshine ~ Talonclaw on Nov 28, 2010 12:03:07 GMT -6
Okay!^^
A few weeks past with Stream, Kang, and Talon. They began walking and running. I wished Venom was here with me to help raise his pups. It hurt to think about him, so I tried to push him out of my head while I watched the little ones explore the outside world. "I gotcha!" Kang laughed, pouncing on Talon. A wide smile appeared on my face while watching them. Talon rolled over from under his brother and nipped his ear, strange and wonderful blue and yellow eyes glittering. Stream, on the other paw, wasn't so keen to rough house with her brothers and I watched her paw at butterflys and study plants. She was so curious about the world and took her time to explore the world. The sun was setting, making the sky blue, purple, and pink. Stream looked at it with me with her mouth open, staring at the colors while Talon and Kang played. The little puppy brought back memories of when I was small like her.. Then Venom came into my mind. His eyes, shiny black pelt . . .
Venom slashed open the hare's throat, feeling the blood get his throat fur wet with sticky blood. It felt so good to him. Everything in the world had become his enemy . . . accept Akka. Her musical howl, fluffy white fur, all his mate. Venom didn't bother eating the hare. Instead, he began stripping it of it's skin. He couldn't wait to kill something else . . .
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Post by Darkfur/Snowwing on Nov 28, 2010 13:06:25 GMT -6
Bravo! Great job, keep it up and post the next one soon please!
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MoonstreamWarriorstormKitewind
Deputy/Medicine Wolf
1 GOLDEN STAR TO YOU, MOONY <3
The mommies eat the pups. It's all an accident. The bees are just an add-in-bonus, ROFL
Posts: 3,512
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Post by MoonstreamWarriorstormKitewind on Nov 29, 2010 20:04:51 GMT -6
Love it!!! Can't wait for the next Chapter!!!!! Please post It Soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Streamshine ~ Talonclaw on Dec 16, 2010 16:40:30 GMT -6
Moons had passed and my pups grew more and more swift motioned and careful. Stream had learned lots about the plants and tiny creatures living around her. Talon and Kang became hard muscled and tough from the play fights. Occisioanally, they would join their sister on her explores, but grew bored. Then one winter day, a striking cold hit us hard in the head. It began to snow with howling and furious winds that seemed to hold no mercy. I was frantic to keep Talon, Kang, and Stream safe from the freezing weather. Since I couldn't hunt properly, we became skiney with desperate hunger. I did the only discition I thought there was to escape the raging storm: Travel. On the 7th day of the blizzard, I moved my pups out of the den and told them what we where to do. "I'm sorry," I began shaking my head against the wind. "But we have to move to survive." Talon and his brother whore faces that said they could survive anything. Stream had the most scared face of all and she whimpered. "But Mother," she wined, looking up at me with desperate blue eyes. "How can we move through this?" "I don't know, but we have to try." I answered, looking down at the snow covered ground. "Well lets go!" Talon growled feircly and began to move. He seemed much more confident about everything, so I walked by his side with Stream on top of my back to keep her warm. Even being next to Venom in this would lift my low hopes.
Snowflakes crashed into his face like angry bullets laced in unstopable anger. Venom kept moving, not fazed by the annoying white dots. Then, a thought interupted him. Akka could die in this! Even I can't hunt or find water in this . . . he whimpered the thought. Venom became very frantic to find Akka and sniffed everywhere he could, but the scents where lost in the deep snow. This began to craze him with worry and he ran amilessly through the black whiteness in a frenzy to find his mate.
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MoonstreamWarriorstormKitewind
Deputy/Medicine Wolf
1 GOLDEN STAR TO YOU, MOONY <3
The mommies eat the pups. It's all an accident. The bees are just an add-in-bonus, ROFL
Posts: 3,512
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Post by MoonstreamWarriorstormKitewind on Dec 17, 2010 17:29:14 GMT -6
Suspenseful!!! Can't wait for the Next Chapter!!!!!!!!!!
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